response
respond
in time
in time
in time
to respond
to respond
in time
will it be enough
will it be
right
will it
rescue
will it
redeem
will it be
the right
response
will it save
breath
heart
mind
hope
will it
return
us
to before
to before
the need
to respond
to save
in time
will it?
the reader can feel the pulse and the urgency
ReplyDeletewithin this poem...
will it ever be enough?
will it return us "to before"
such strong images.
great poem.